Location: Somewhere in Pune
Day: Yesterday
Time 7:30 PM IST
It was end of another fight, I said "Bye, C U Tomorrow!" I closed the door and was waiting for Lift at the fifth floor. Suddenly She came outside and said "Manish Lets go to terrace I want to talk to you." I thought what the hell is this, 2 minutes before we were fighting (I guess) now she wants to tell me something it was horrifying and unexpected.
The chilling breeze and the cloudy night accompanied us on the terrace; she started with her past life as I didn’t know many things about her. But believe me this was least expected. I didn't have any words to make her happy at that time.. All my philosophy was in vain. I shared a "HT Story - All 22" with her. We both paused for few minutes and then few of the building residents started coming on terrace as it was a "Karwachowth" evening and it was the time to see The "Chaand"-The most awaited guest of the day. 2-3 uncles were waiting for Moon. After few minutes one of the uncles came towards us and said - “Beta moon nikal gaya hai, tum dono oos taraf jaakar dekh sakte ho." OMG... I replied with rocket speed - "nahi Nahi.... hamein chaand nahi dekhna hai." And he gave a huge smile to us.
I thought "It's the time to move to the other part of terrace." It was really funny. we stayed there, shared few more things. I was feeling light than ever before. (9:30PM)I was feeling hungry so we went to the flat again and had dinner. It was time to say Final Goodbye for the day....
When I was leaving for my place on my bike, I don’t know what happened but I had few drops of chemically salted water in my eyes. May be the reason behind it was - The bike, The Wind, HT -22, Her Past, The current condition or the fear of Our Future ................. I don't know!!!!
<--- Manish Jain --->
Thursday, October 8, 2009
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13 comments:
hey manish..its realy a good piece of writing..i liked it ..wel keep posting :)
chal hat !!!!!!!!!!!!:P
purposefully trying to make other emotional
wase this funny situation of karwachod should be sent to ekta kappor for consideration for her next venture :)
@Mr Controversial(Sheela) ...
Its true yaara.. you can ask dudet also...
mast he bhai novel print karwa le.........chal padegi...
why is the title "one of the last meet"..you had similar last meets or something
@aadish:
I am ready to write the complete novel.. but if you can publish please try.. I will give you 25% of profit (If profit !!!)
@Mind Predator
Yup .. it is one of the last meet... I hope that this will not be the LAST...
well....its a good post by the way....especially the ending where u could not control ur emotions..and tears slipped through your eyes...without directly mentioning it, but for the reader to visualize it...and also trying to blame the surrounding atmospheric background you had at that time..
is it fiction or real?
If it is real then I pity that girl and if it is fiction then I pity you :P :D
Where is Satyam Story? I am waiting!!!
@tarun: thrz nthng like pity..on neone neither tht gal nor manish..whether it is real or fiction..
the story doesnt potray tht gal or manish as a person who are lamenting or somethng..like mourning..its jst a moment of sharing ...
what else is left with satyamz fiasco..everyone must hav read it in newspapers..and magazines..
Dudet - Moment of sharing what??
Well I don't know about you, whether you were in Satyam or not but I know what goes inside is completely different from media stories........
I want to know the VPP story, which Manish can state in a better way :)
awesome yaara........the way u started it was superb and ending lines are also too guddddd....l enjoyed very much!!!!
I never know that u r too gud at writing! Is this true incident???
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